一、描述段

作文首段為描述段，描述段的內(nèi)容大概包括兩個方面：1、描述圖畫內(nèi)容。2、揭示寓意。

第一句-描述句-描述圖畫內(nèi)容

1、一幅圖畫

A、The cartoon describes a very common phenomenon in our society that 內(nèi)容-SVO.

B、As can be seen from the picture ,(there is)內(nèi)容-SVO.

2、兩幅圖畫

A、The set of drawings describe a very common phenomenon in our society that 內(nèi)容-SVO.

B、Presenting totally different /sharply contrasted scenes, the two pictures suggest that 內(nèi)容-SVO.

第二句-引出話題

1、社會熱點現(xiàn)象

In recent years , along with the tremendous advance of the society , 主題has become a hot issue of the general public , especially for those who are confronted with the situation .

2、社會熱點問題

Nothing can be more serious (upsetting, outstanding, meaningful…) than the issue of…

3、良好品質(zhì)

第三句-主題句-進一步引出主題

It is most likely that by drawing the picture, the drawer intends not only to tell us the story of … but also to let us think more about 主題.This is something we should give more thought to.

二、主旨段

主旨段是全文表情達意最重要的一段，因此內(nèi)容應(yīng)該很詳實。主要分兩步走。

第一步：圍繞主題，進一步闡述圖片中關(guān)于主題所表現(xiàn)出的兩個or三個方面

A、After carefully thinking and reflection , we come to understand the enlightening picture step by step . I believe that this thought-provoking picture conveys two layers of meanings. For one thing 方面1-SVO. For another 方面2-SVO. This simple picture wakes up the whole of the society.

B、Having scrutinized the details of the pictures, we can discuss the implications subtly conveyed from it. For one thing 方面1-SVO. For another 方面2-SVO.This simple picture wakes up the whole of the society.

第二步：圍繞主題，進一步闡述圖片中出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象的兩個原因or兩個方面

A、There are several driving forces this trend/phenomenon. The main reason is no other than that 原因1-SVO .What’s more,原因2-SVO.原因3-SVO also plays a role in this case.

B、To account for the above mentioned phenomenon (issue, tendency) various reasons (causes) have been put forward. In the very beginning 原因1-SVO.And then 原因2-SVO.What is more, last but 原因2-SVO.

三、總結(jié)段

最后一段是總結(jié)段，這段的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括三個方面的內(nèi)容，如下：

1、一般趨勢的建議(評論)。

2、良好品質(zhì)的贊揚(舉例)。

3、反面現(xiàn)象的解決方法(措施)。

1.評論

Taking into account the factors above, we can safely draw a conclusion that主旨(不多寫、簡單句). On one hand 建議1-SVO. On the other hand 建議2- SVO.

I believe then the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in.(社會和諧)

In order to make our world a better place in which to live, we must learn to live in harmony with the nature. (自然和諧)

2.舉例

What the thought-provoking picture illustrates is a common phenomenon in contemporary society. Examples to prove the view are abundant. It can be given a concrete example 舉例1-SVO . Another good case in point is that 舉例2-SVO. In my belief, 主旨-SVO is extremely significant to all of us in our society. We should translate it into proper action in daily life, and then we will benefit from it.

3.措施

Then, what can we do to deal with the problem have become a concern to many people. From my views, the following measures should be attached importance to. To begin with , we should appeal to the government to make relevant laws(plans, rules) and carry out a series of policy to 跟主旨相關(guān)內(nèi)容 to guarantee a proper order and justice. What’s more , we should enhance the awareness of people that 主題 is vital to us . The general public should also made realization that any prompt solution is of benefit to all. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future.